New poem from me called as "Its you". It is a sweet poem with a lovely twist in the end.
Its you
Out in the sunshine, so bright
Lake view, a lovely sight
Indeed it is lovely weather
I always cherish our times together
Our dances together in sync
Like I care what people think!
Breezy afternoon, our bike rides!
Together in beach sands, watching tides!
You add life to my soul
Together! how about a stroll?
I am nothing without you
We are one and not two
Isn't it true?
One wish, I wish could come true!
Together in the dark besides each other
and count stars one after another
I know it will never come true
As I am your shadow and I am you!
Just in case if you thought the poem is about a gal, please re-read the poem again after reading the last line of the poem :-).
Saturday, 27 December 2008
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2 comments:
i loved this poem ...i knew it was shadow in the beginning itself
Thanks. Than the twist, the poem carries lot of in depth meanings. Glad that you could work out the twist before the end.
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